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This was very interesting. More please (:

I have already seen this one somewhere on here. The beginning of this is a great way to start something off, but it needs more emotion and expression. Also, please ...

Very good piece of work. I think that you shoul have added a little more emotion. I like how the mirror was used.

Wow. Great emotion and feeling. This was concluded in a great style and it stayed relevantly to the point. Great job. Keep it up. -Macy Sene'e

Thank you so much. This is definately going to help me make a character in my future works. -Macy Sene'e

Emily, hahaha (: I love you, girl! You are hilarious && you have an amazing personality. I'm glad I've gotten to know you. I have a [secret] obsession with Nick ...

The word beautiful is different to many people. Something that is beautiful to one person could be hideous to another person. But no matter what someone thinks, you still go ...

Thanks for your help. I will try to make these as interesting as possible. In fact, this one I wrote three years ago. I just finished another book that I ...

CHAPTER ONE: EXCITING NEWS Dark (14), Elizabeth (15), Ivy (10), and Saxton (9) sat at booth number three, expecting to find out something less boring than what they actually were ...