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That was really good, but just watch out for words that really don't need to be in your writing. At the end you should have put how Juliet ended up ...

Why am I always alone? Why does know one want to be near me? Is it because the curse I bear? Or the horrible beast that lays inside me yearning ...

Hey that was a really great story, but you need to improve your grammer alittle more. Also make sure to really descride what they look like and there surrounding like ...

Go a little slower next time, describe the surroundings a little more. I think its good keep up the good work, just make sure to slow down great things cant ...

So true... I think thats how most people feel, they can act like they love life but truely feel lost inside. You should keep up the good work.

Wow thats really good, keep it up!

For as long as I can remember Sara worked at the music store on 5th street. I never really talked to her except to talk about the differences between guitar ...