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No I don't think your review helped at all in fact it just pissed me off. I know what im doing with my story and I do not need someone ...

Brittani I really love my him that is what I know. I have loved him since we were in 8th grade, ever since we had history together. I knew I ...

This was really good, I think if people who are considering suiside read this they would change there mind. I would have liked to know what the boy im guessing ...

Hey that was really good, but at the end make sure to but in my heart or something like that. Because my perverted side saw and it cracked up laughing. ...

I like the song alot I would have never heard it if didn't join choir thank you, you made my day!

This reminds me of a really cool historic nusery rhyme! Like something little kids would make up about the British comming. Nothing really bothered me in this, I could not ...

Well I wrote this in school oneday and our teacher want us to write a story useing most of the lyrics so thats what I did.

I stood in the rain staring down at the cold gray grave stone reading the words I have learned to dread. "In this place lies our loving John, may he ...

Hey really good story its just you need to watch your grammar. Like when you said "already die?" it needs to be already dead. Also this is just a question ...

Wow you did really good, great shading work. I really like how the necks and heads are comming out of that one body its really cool. Good job, it would ...

For some reason when I read this it makes me think of a one night stand and a week later the girl finds out she is pregnet and the guy ...

Holly crap that was really good, I could not find anything wrong with it. I really love the Cul-de-sac haha it make me laugh so hard and I really don't ...

That was good just try not to repeat known in the same line.

This story is sad but what makes it really sad is that it happens to girls around the country everyday. I think you sould continue the story, I would really ...

It was a really good story, the ending kinda confused me a bit. You need to watch your gammar just a bit, and also make sure to describe the little ...