brittany867

I haven't written in a while, any feedback or suggestions would be great! The plot isn't exactly clear with this first chapter but I promise the plot will move forward ...

thanks ! haha, im just happy someone likes it. i'll definately let you know when i have the second chapter out

I quickly glanced at this piece, but it only took a couple sentences to keep me hooked until it ended. I love the way you write, the horrible jam incident ...

The night must have been confused. Instead of the sky hosting an exceptionally delicious black color across its body, a majestic navy blue took its place. The blue made the ...

I loved the descriptive language you used in this peice, it kept me hooked until the end. There are a couple of spelling mistakes, but I'm sure you've already found ...

Wow. :) I love how descriptive this poem is about true love, how unforgiveable it can be. It really made me visualize the scene in my mind. Keep it up ...

yeah, your right i was a bit obsessed with Twilight at the time that I wrote this, I think i need to pratice my style of writing more too, it ...

I would love for someone to help me edit this, I dont know if I have the right feel of the story yet :) Thanks! Brittany Chapter One- I could ...