brianbags

I like how you introduced the "Monster" and revealed at the end that it was cancer. I love when I read/watch something that has an ending that makes you look ...

I thought the beginning was an excellent dream sequence. Dumbledore sitting there while Harry and Hermione were getting intimate was a great touch...definitely something that we would see in a ...

As others have said, I think the whole idea of this was great. It was funny, but not overboard. There is always a fine line between trying too hard to ...