break~my~heart

Hi there! I'm tennis! You know, I usually dread these types of poems. I think of them as twilight ripoffs, but this one actually wasn't that bad. Let's get to ...

ugh it's missing something, and it's weak and just so...so...eww. I hate this one. :( .__________________________________________ . When the sun slowly falls, and the silver moon may rise, I escape ...

same here about the 5th stanza. i would put some input but i havent the slightist idea on what you are trying to interpret!!! ok heres my unerstanding: To it, ...

oooh :smt060 LOL what's the series called?

Heya! That was great. Especially since I know what it's about. You're a great writer. Way better than me, so you have to help me out sometime! I need advice ...

I really liked this. I couldn't spot any nitpicks. (but then again its almost midnight. I'll double check in the morning.) You did a great job with detail. The only ...

I really liked this. I couldn't spot any nitpicks. (but then again its almost midnight. I'll double check in the morning.) You did a great job with detail. The only ...

thanks again :D get right on it :wink: til then XoXo~AsH

oooh I liked this alot!!! (this guy sounds really hot :wink: ) hey!! I rhymed!!! uh huh oh yea! 8) Soooo....anyways....this won't even count as a review, becaaaause, guess what? ...

The whole poem was themed "violence", so the title of the whole poem was called "More than Just Violence". But I only felt one piece actually seemed pretty decent and ...

i have written this poem a very long time ago..i just dig this in my old notebook's pile and have decided to post..... i love you above anyone do (did ...

thank you everyone!! Let the editing begin! :smt115 (garsh these emotithingies are addicting!! :D )

this is so good!! and when I was reading it, I was like, wow, this is so much like Because of You by kelly clarkson!! And then that song came ...

The silky green grass begins to shimmer under a light that's growing dimmer. We lie on our backs, and gaze at the sun, hands intertwined. The day is nearly done. ...

All right so here I go. The idea behind the poem as all ideas should be is great. The poems funny i will grant you that. Also the use of ...