break~my~heart

this is beautiful! you guys should post stuff on youtube too :D

"heck, I ran away when I was 14. It's scarier than hell, I'll tell you that right now. In fact, if you tried, you'd probably die. I loved running away." ...

you know you're a writer when, due to editing and proof reading, you can recite most of your written novel.

I hope this doesn't hurt your feelings over and over I just kept cringing at your dialogue, and plot. Where is your originality? If sex is what you want to ...

ok so I have to write this paper, but I couldn't think of an idea (never can) so it was the last minute, and my friend Lindsie, came up with ...

He saw an angel of this he was sure, I have to say, this line reminded so much of David Blunt's song 'Beautiful'. God that song was annoying... Ask me ...

Broken hearted souls, you are welcome here tonight. C rying infants who were abandoned, come You who need the love of one another, Gather under the cedar tree , your ...

When I first heard my lover speak, his voice was just a low whisper in the sound of the rushing wind. Barely audible but distinguished nonetheless. His hair was like ...

hi there! me again :wink: For some reason, I love short poems. They're always the most beautiful. And you've certainly kept it that way with this piece! I have nothing ...

I never claimed that I was perfect. awesome opening! In fact, I know that I was the polar opposite. But you : Pressured and pressured, Wanted me to be like ...

[quote="supersweetie"]you hurt i hurt you go through rough times ; me not so much perhaps "many" would be better. correct grammar sounds better. you tell me everything. i understand and ...

oh. wow. writewatiwant, you are soooooo talented!! seriously, I can't think of anything really to point out critique worthy that the others haven't already. but your piece totally left me ...

touching, i enjoyed reading your poem. And yes i have lost a soulmate, but in a diffrent way. its sad to say, but it just had to happen that way. ...

thank you so much!! you have no idea how absolutely amazing that feels to have such a good critt!!!!!! well, ok maybe you do haha!! thanks :D XoXo~AsH

Soulmate One very lurid and rainy night, one very reckless driver's sight paid no mind to the red traffic light, nor to the wayfarer, who had the right. As the ...