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Thanks ryanke07!

Good point. Unfortunately, the contest has a word limit of 1000, and I haven't got a word to spare. I might be able to shift some stuff around in the ...

The villagers of Montañalento had never seen such impatience in a woman, but their experience with Westerners was limited. After hearing about the “man who eats time”, she demanded they ...

I'll admit I don't know much about poetry at the beginning here, so I'll just give you my general impression. I thought it was nice and upbeat, but the rhymes ...

My one tip would be try to incorporate more "showing" rather than "telling" in your narrative. I felt like too much information was given to me to easily.

No reviews yet? Shame. Anyway, great imagery! Your characterization was quick and effective too which was fun to read. I thought the plot was pretty good, but it seemed to ...

Hello Lindabelle, Entertaining read you have here. I enjoyed it! The only thing that bothered me was the very last sentence, which is unfortunate when the rest is pretty good. ...

Hello everyone! I've just started an account here, and it seems like a pretty cool site so far. I love contests too so I was excited to see this site ...

Hello Nafe! This is my first review on this site, but I'll try to point out a few things. First of all, I liked the twist at the end... to ...