bradsk88

I wrote this three years ago, to symbolize an episode of my life. This is part two, I've since lost the first. I've not edited it. -- It's been quite ...

Might be a bit of a spoiler, maybe not. But this chapter introduces almost ALL of the supporting characters, so no worries about that in chapters to come. And from ...

Chapter 1 Thanks to clograbby and sugarbowl for editing tips. Chapter 2 Thanks to Xena for being a big fat poo poo head and not liking my story :lol: The ...

Wow, is it weird that I've been in the EXACT same position as Kyle with a girl EXACTLY like Lana? Crazy. Edits \/ Lana leaned against the school lockers as ...

If you take nothing else from this review, I would at least recommend that you almost never end sentences in exclaimation marks. You can usually take the sentences that end ...

They're not on the moon ;) If you would believe it, this is my fourth attempt at writing the same story. On one of those attempts I did exactly what ...

... or eight-times-over. Learn to love re-reading is my best advice.

Chapter 1 Thanks to clograbby and sugarbowl for editing tips. Chapter 2 “Okay, you're lucky. You got me. And I'm gonna let you in on a little secret.” Mark said, ...

Don't get me wrong, the story was good, but it needs a lot of work. You need to keep a firm grasp on past and present tense, even one mistake ...

Ooh! Haha. Really unique, I can see something developing out of this, it's got a metric ton of potential. There are some typos, so take a look through it again: ...

"Moonfield" isn't really the title I want to go with, haha. But it'll have to do. So I'm working on a story in the little free time I find myself ...

I don't know who said it but I heard a quote once "The hardest part about writing is deciding what to leave out" You've got a couple of adjectives and ...

Very good, I like it, and I'll definitely check it out as it progresses. I'd recommend posting it in single chapters (the dashed lines are chapter dividers right?), just to ...