bradsk88

Well, I've taken a big, fat, long break from writing. But I just took a second read of my story the other night and I was inspired to keep the ...

Write what you wish, just don't become this forum's Amanda Ros

In good literature (read: stories people WANT to read) characters don't talk like real people do. They make no grammatical errors and they carry the most carefully worded conversations you ...

....... yeah, I see what you're saying, it's kind of rough. I'll have another stab at this.

Thanks a lot. I was hoping someone might mention the proper punctuation for dialogue 'cause I hardly put any thought into it, both sound right to me even though I ...

The warmth of the sun on his neck woke Mark up in the morning. Somehow, he had wound up lying in the wet grass beside the log he had been ...

I lifted my glance from the computer screen. And looked at Jack when he passed by I didn’t understand why he liked to call me after what it said on ...

I took some notes while I read this, it still has a couple of crinkles but it's a great improvement from the last. Try: "A tattoo ran down my neck ...

Finally! This story is going somewhere. Okay so I'll start with the good stuff, bad stuff later. There are a lot of good word choices here, like I said before, ...

I find it so interesting, and also so frustrating that people are making the same comments about my pace being too slow. I've been writing this in standard 4"x6" pages, ...

I was hoping if I wrote it like a three year old you'd take it as the sarcasm it is, I hold nothing against you :P Also, yeah this is ...

Chapter 1 Thanks to clograbby and sugarbowl for editing tips. Chapter 2 Thanks to Xena for being a big fat poo poo head and not liking my story :lol: Chapter ...

Not much I can suggest for this one, it's well done in my opinion. (Of course, every story can stand a couple dosen revisions just for the hell of it ...

Since he had nowhere to live and no money, Clover decided the best thing to do was get a job. He wandered the cold streets of the village, not knowing ...

Yeah, I won't be revising this, nor really paying any regard to it. Just wanted some opinions for the sake of opinions. Thanks.