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Re: Call - Part 1
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Jan 10, 2011 -
Re: Call - Part 1
This is my first attempt at any romantic writing longer than a paragraph, that isn't a song. I'm still working on part, so here, fresh out of the oven, is ...
Jan 10, 2011 -
Re: Chosen
The idea for this came from the webcomic XKCD, and does borrow heavily from it. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I don’t know why, but I was chosen. It started o
Jan 7, 2011 -
Re: The Stranger
Everybody else seems to have pointed out the serious problem with this: grammar. There were quite a few times where I had no clue what was going on simply because ...
Aug 23, 2010 -
Re: The Silence *Rated 12 for violence*
I was beginning to really get into the story, until the word "daggel" came up. Honestly, just saying "dagger" or "spear" would have worked, because daggel feels awkward, and it ...
Aug 23, 2010 -
Re: "Our Goodbye" by Brian
I fixed the remaining typo and used some of the suggestions to alter the song a bit. for the cold/close dilemma, I left it like that because the speed they're ...
Aug 19, 2010 -
Re: "Our Goodbye" by Brian
Thank you very much! I originally typed this at 3 in the morning and forgot to check for typos before i copied it onto here, but all the typos should ...
Aug 16, 2010 -
Re: Smile (I Am Leaving)
As many others are saying, I am not the biggest of rap fans. However, this does sound fun and it would be cool to be able to actually hear this ...
Aug 16, 2010 -
Re: "Our Goodbye" by Brian
As the cold blows over us you start to sweat, yet I hold you close then when the tides change you start to drown I'll be your life vest and ...
Aug 16, 2010 -
Re: Welcome New Members! [2]
I am Brian. I occasionally write lyrics, so if anything you'll see me there. :D
Aug 16, 2010
