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  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Call - Part 1

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    Jan 10, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Call - Part 1

    This is my first attempt at any romantic writing longer than a paragraph, that isn't a song. I'm still working on part, so here, fresh out of the oven, is ...

    Jan 10, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Chosen

    The idea for this came from the webcomic XKCD, and does borrow heavily from it. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I don’t know why, but I was chosen. It started o

    Jan 7, 2011
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: The Stranger

    Everybody else seems to have pointed out the serious problem with this: grammar. There were quite a few times where I had no clue what was going on simply because ...

    Aug 23, 2010
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: The Silence *Rated 12 for violence*

    I was beginning to really get into the story, until the word "daggel" came up. Honestly, just saying "dagger" or "spear" would have worked, because daggel feels awkward, and it ...

    Aug 23, 2010
  • Lyrics Re: "Our Goodbye" by Brian

    I fixed the remaining typo and used some of the suggestions to alter the song a bit. for the cold/close dilemma, I left it like that because the speed they're ...

    Aug 19, 2010
  • Lyrics Re: "Our Goodbye" by Brian

    Thank you very much! I originally typed this at 3 in the morning and forgot to check for typos before i copied it onto here, but all the typos should ...

    Aug 16, 2010
  • Lyrics Re: Smile (I Am Leaving)

    As many others are saying, I am not the biggest of rap fans. However, this does sound fun and it would be cool to be able to actually hear this ...

    Aug 16, 2010
  • Lyrics Re: "Our Goodbye" by Brian

    As the cold blows over us you start to sweat, yet I hold you close then when the tides change you start to drown I'll be your life vest and ...

    Aug 16, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: Welcome New Members! [2]

    I am Brian. I occasionally write lyrics, so if anything you'll see me there. :D

    Aug 16, 2010


“Rise like Lions after slumber In unvanquishable number. Shake your chains to earth like dew Which in sleep had fallen on you— Ye are many—they are few.”
— Mary Shelly