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  • Other Poetry Re: Pangaea

    Good idea, but I'm not so fond of the poem itself. The metaphor itself has a great deal of potential. For me, the poem went downhill at "no more are ...

    Mar 16, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: A collection of poetry

    Feed not on thy soul; For thy soul follows not convention. Render me with your colours And keep me near the wind. I don't like the archaism, actually. To me, ...

    Mar 16, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: Hot Air Balloon

    Nice sweet review! It was warming. But that's beside the point, because you completely misinterpreted the poem. The title is an extended metaphor representing the "hot air" or inadequacy of ...

    Mar 16, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: Hot Air Balloon

    Nice sweet review! It was warming. But that's beside the point, because you completely misinterpreted the poem. The title is an extended metaphor representing the "hot air" or inadequacy of ...

    Mar 16, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: Street Lamp

    Outside, a pool of light in the darkness- cast by a solitary street-lamp- orange-bright, illuminating the stop sign at the end of the road. Four faint white letters: S T ...

    Mar 16, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: Hot Air Balloon

    Love isn’t a word, so don’t say it again please. My ears are bleeding. Can’t you see the streaming fountains flowing? I wonder if it ever occurred to you, up ...

    Mar 15, 2009


Don't aim at success--the more you aim at it and make it a target, the more you are going to miss it. For success, like happiness, cannot be pursued; it must ensue, and it only does so as the unintended side-effect of one's dedication to a cause greater than oneself or as the by-product of one's surrender to a person other than oneself.
— Viktor E. Frankl