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Re: Pangaea
Good idea, but I'm not so fond of the poem itself. The metaphor itself has a great deal of potential. For me, the poem went downhill at "no more are ...
Mar 16, 2009 -
Re: A collection of poetry
Feed not on thy soul; For thy soul follows not convention. Render me with your colours And keep me near the wind. I don't like the archaism, actually. To me, ...
Mar 16, 2009 -
Re: Hot Air Balloon
Nice sweet review! It was warming. But that's beside the point, because you completely misinterpreted the poem. The title is an extended metaphor representing the "hot air" or inadequacy of ...
Mar 16, 2009 -
Re: Hot Air Balloon
Nice sweet review! It was warming. But that's beside the point, because you completely misinterpreted the poem. The title is an extended metaphor representing the "hot air" or inadequacy of ...
Mar 16, 2009 -
Re: Street Lamp
Outside, a pool of light in the darkness- cast by a solitary street-lamp- orange-bright, illuminating the stop sign at the end of the road. Four faint white letters: S T ...
Mar 16, 2009 -
Re: Hot Air Balloon
Love isn’t a word, so don’t say it again please. My ears are bleeding. Can’t you see the streaming fountains flowing? I wonder if it ever occurred to you, up ...
Mar 15, 2009
