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  • Other Poetry Re: Pangaea

    Good idea, but I'm not so fond of the poem itself. The metaphor itself has a great deal of potential. For me, the poem went downhill at "no more are ...

    Mar 16, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: A collection of poetry

    Feed not on thy soul; For thy soul follows not convention. Render me with your colours And keep me near the wind. I don't like the archaism, actually. To me, ...

    Mar 16, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: Hot Air Balloon

    Nice sweet review! It was warming. But that's beside the point, because you completely misinterpreted the poem. The title is an extended metaphor representing the "hot air" or inadequacy of ...

    Mar 16, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: Hot Air Balloon

    Nice sweet review! It was warming. But that's beside the point, because you completely misinterpreted the poem. The title is an extended metaphor representing the "hot air" or inadequacy of ...

    Mar 16, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: Street Lamp

    Outside, a pool of light in the darkness- cast by a solitary street-lamp- orange-bright, illuminating the stop sign at the end of the road. Four faint white letters: S T ...

    Mar 16, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: Hot Air Balloon

    Love isn’t a word, so don’t say it again please. My ears are bleeding. Can’t you see the streaming fountains flowing? I wonder if it ever occurred to you, up ...

    Mar 15, 2009


I think the best thing about making it into the quote generator is when nobody tells you, so one day you're just scrolling and voila, some phenomenally inane thing that crawled out of your dying synapses and immediately regretted being born the second it made contact with the air has been archived for all time. Or worse, a remark of only average inanity. Never tell me when you've put me in the generator. Pride-tinged regret just doesn't taste the same without the spice of surprise.
— SirenCymbaline