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Re: 2089: Love in the Time of War (Part 2 of 3)
Hello! Boundless here for a review :) I'm not a fan of big paragraphs. I feel like it makes reading a little more difficult than it needs to be. If ...
Jun 17, 2015 -
Re: Possession, Part 1
Hello! I like what you're doing with this story. It creates an air of suspense without being scary- I can't wait to read more! I'd like to offer a few ...
Jun 15, 2015 -
Re: The Things That Cannot Be
I liked this story! It's short and sweet- I felt that it was well executed for such a short story. The vagueness (lack of names, referring to society as a ...
Jun 15, 2015 -
Re: Ella [Part 1/3]
Hi EternalRain! I liked this story- it was nicely written and realistic. I think it could use a little editing, but for the most part you have a good base ...
Jun 12, 2015