boston1533

I agree with many of the other reviewers. You have good ideas, good emotions, they just got kind of lost in the poem. There wasn't an apparent structure. If you ...

I look to the foot of my bed, legs tangled and twined together. Your arms wrapped around my bare-skinned waist. My smirk - dangerous, thoughts running back to last night. ...

the end is definitely the best. makes me want to run to patterson right quick. I also agree with the person above me. That line creates a great image. as ...

This was amazing. I was confused the whole time but I got some crazy images. You're style is original and intriguing, please keep writing things like this. Good on you, ...

The snow has that effect on people you know what I mean? Everything turns white as cotton, nothings what it seems. Smiles shine as the child in us starts to ...

So i read this... commented on it and then deleted it because I was so excited about a military post that I went to your profile. What do I find ...

"Come on Gaffney! Get in the car," I pleaded in an exasperated voice accompanied by a stupid grin that just wouldn't go away. "No," she said as she turned away. ...

Yup, I'm commenting on my own post to respond to some posts. First of all, this story is a one-shot. I'm all for constructive criticism but really? Second thing, there's ...

He does look good all dressed in blues, but I like boys in ACU's. With dirty boots and digi gear, and sounding off, you got all clear. Oohrah that, and ...

You leatherneck, jarhead, troubled teen, I just call you my marine. Desert digis, combat boots, but you just call 'em boots and utes. You won't listen to a thing I ...

15 months. 15 long months since he left. Don’t get me wrong, I love being a navy girlfriend. It’s the best job in the world. Then again, maybe it was ...