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  • Not sure (Any ideas?)

    Chapter 1: Nightmares The long dusty road seemed to never end the fog was so thick you couldn’t see an inch in front of you, there was rubbish everywhere and ...

    3 min read
  • Don't think i'm going to finish

    Please review, say what you thought of this. I'd really like to know! The gentle lapping of the waves at me feet relaxed my body. Pictures of what had happened ...

    2 min read
  • The Missing

    I drove slowly down the familiar street to my house trying not to look at anything but the road. But i still managed to spot them - it was pretty ...

    3 min read
  • Revenge

    Hello. Please leave me a comment, even if its not a review. Just tell me what your opinons are of this piece, dislikes and likes. I am entering this into ...

    13 min read
  • Revenge (Edited & Added onto)

    I'm thinking about putting this piece into a Short Story competition. Could somebody please help me fix it up? Tell me what your opinions are. Cheers, Born. My body hurt ...

    14 min read
  • Funeral

    Okay, so totally unorginal title. If you have any other ideas could you please tell me? I'm not completely finished, but what do you think about it this far? I ...

    9 min read
  • Memory Loss

    My heart thudded loudly and my knees shook under my weight. Please, please, please let the door close. I thought to myself. Pushing myself into the furtherest corner of the ...

    6 min read
  • Funeral (2)

    Hey there! This is the second and last part to my story, Funeral. I've tried my hardest at trying to get my punctuation with dialogue right. I don't know if ...

    9 min read
  • Goodbye, i love you.

    Hey there This is just a quick piece that i made up in about half an hour. Words just formed in my head and i wrote them down, so i ...

    5 min read
  • The Cost Of a Parents Disaproval

    Hey there! I wrote this really quick, and i have no idea if it's any good. I don't know if i like the ending and i know there are a ...

    11 min read
  • School Assignment (no title)

    I've finally written something! It's been months. Still, I only wrote this because it's for a school assignment, and I want to pass English. We had to write about 'then' ...

    3 min read
  • Titanic Love Story
    14 min read
  • Titanic Love Story (Part 2)
    22 min read


Everything has a consequence and every consequence leads to death.
— kattee