borntobeawriter

You have done well young Padawan! I'm glad you modified the line up there that I suggested, great work Susie! Please PM me when you post the next chapter Tanya

I know! They were pissing me off! And I'm the writer ! LOL

And by the way, she was fourteen when she got pregnant but fifteen when she gave birth ...lol

Evi, Pink, Talulah and Ash, Thanks guys for the reviews. William is pure evil and he will be explained much further; remember, this is only a prologue. The next chapter ...

Pink, Jayleigh, as usual: Thanks for the great review! And Karsten, wow! Can I hire you? lol I'm going to pull back witht the Descendants for some time to work ...

LOL, great few sentences...But...what happens next?! LOL Tanya

Ok, what went so horribly wrong between chapters 2 and 3? You guys seemed to like the previous one! LOL Seriously, Jayleigh, how can I take offense? If I'm asking ...

David! Thanks for coming online! You really are the best person (as per this particular story) to comment because you've read the first version and I really wanted to know ...

Hey Pink, I'm still reading, I just hadn't seen that chapter 7 and 8 are out. So, yeah, I read it and I have no nitpicks. The story is interesting ...

hi Jayleigh! Thanks a lot for the awesome review and you're forgiven any tardiness. lol I haven't had the time yet to work out the reviews of these first two ...

Thank you, thank you, thank you! It was a great review with some great advice. Third chapter should be posted soon. Tanya :D

Hi Wizkid! Thanks for the nice comment ! ANd you're right; it does lack description and it IS shock...Lol...Unfortunately, it isn't always easy being bilingual lol Tanya

Hi! Thanks for Pming me lol. I loved this chapter! I have nothing to add -as a nitpick- that hasn't already been said. Please pm me for the next chapter? ...

Hi Jayleigh! Thanks for the review, it is very helpful! I made the news an obvious point because it sort of helps in the story. I mean, you and I ...

Thanks Pink! lol Sorry about the tense. I wrote it the first time around in the present tense and now I'm rewriting it in the past. I'm doing a lot ...