borntobeawriter

Hey! I want one of those hot chocolate things! Yeah, Susie got an idea for a story a few years back and asked me to write it. So I did. ...

Hey Rain, Great job editing. I have a few nitpicks! The sound of the their shuffling feet, fluttering scarves, and whipping coats were engulfed by the massive dejected toll coming ...

Ha ha. I know that! When I cry, I look all splotchy for a hell of a while. Tanya can attest to that. I do attest to that *nods solemnly*. ...

Actually, Emma, my boyfriend had just gotten home from his trip when I saw the email and I thought, "Crap! When will I be able to get around to this?" ...

In Britain, you only have to be 18 to buy alcohol in a lot of places, especially drinks like cider. Meh! Same here in Quebec. It's 18 and older. Although ...

Actually, I wasn't trying to picture anyone. His personality is so strong that I never stopped to wonder, "Hmm, wonder what he looks like". But this guy is pretty good ...

*growls* I'll pretend I didn't hear any of that....For now ;)

Yeah, you got what I meant. But...I mean, maybe she can look puzzled a little, then smile because suddenly, she caught on to his line of questioning, you know? Make ...

I have nothing to add here except Richard's a jerk. Good chapter, though. And why do I have the awful conviction that Ollie's got a terminal disease.........*sighs*

Tanya and her reputation as a story-bully... Get writing, Tanya! We need somethign to bully YOU with! ;D xx Maybe you should. You might be the spoonful of medecine I ...

For Tanya and Emma, yeah I meant allergic; for some reason I wrote asthmatic, or maybe it's my keyboard being evil.. who knows? Suz, it's called the nut behind the ...

Pink! Ahhhhhhhh *sighs* Much, much, MUCH better! Great job turning this story around! Do not remove Olivia''s swearing; it works with her personality. The only thing I found that others ...

Lol, you should have seen me stalk the pc until I saw your email telling me there was a new chappy (I tried to act surprise, but let's face it; ...

Great, I can't wait :D And thank you for the formatting: A much easier read! Tanya

Haha, thanks Emma! I'm glad you enjoyed the website! And how do you get through doorways with your swelled-up head? ;) Seriously, I'm so glad my sister asked me to ...