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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Guardians

    Hey rustic-rebel, I'm here for a review, obviously :D Here I go: I have always known. Somewhere inside I understood that humans were not alone on this earth. Little did ...

    Jan 16, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Thorns & Roses [6]

    Hey Pink, Apparently I was beaten to your review and Aquamarine did a fine job of it, I have nothing to add except to say that I love this, hehe ...

    Jan 16, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Breena (Fourteen)

    Yay, Fourteen! Thanks for telling me Jayleigh. the kings and queens were loosing their battle, and Summer would be queen. Losing, isn't it? Well, that was my only nitpick. As ...

    Jan 9, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Thorns & Roses [5]

    OH! Jayleigh got here before me! LOL A few typos... My only ‘girl friend’ that accepted me they way I was. The? I unmated the TV and drowned myself in ...

    Jan 2, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Breena (Thirteen)

    Yay! Finally, thirteen! Thanks for PMing me Jayleigh! :D I tried adjusting my positin , but that only made me scream out in agony Position, maybe? “I’m starting to agree ...

    Jan 2, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Black Wolf (Chapt. 1 / Part 1)

    Hi Red, Well, you had me totally hooked from line one. I really enjoyed the flow of this first part and I have absolutely nothing negative to say . . ...

    Dec 29, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The First Christmas (2)

    Hi Elinor! Okay, I just read your first two parts and I have the distinct impression this is turning into a Santa Claus0type story. Very good and interesting. A few ...

    Dec 29, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Thorns & Roses [4]

    Pink! Everyone else got here before me! Crap! LOL. Everything that needed to be said was said, as per my opinion. I loved this chapter, they are getting better every ...

    Dec 26, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Thorns & Roses [3]

    Hey Pink! Thanks for asking me to review! Our car ride was quite , in fact, I didn’t speak to him once I assume you meant 'quiet' or quite silent...Or ...

    Dec 17, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Thorns & Roses [2]

    Hi ! Hi! I'm alive, sorry about the delay, haven't been home much in the past few days! So, on with the review! I could totally handle this guy right? ...

    Dec 11, 2009
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Keeper: [7]

    Hey Pink! Loved this chapter. Much like Jayleigh, I got hooked on what was happening and didn't right away see the mistakes so I reread lol. These are my nitpicks: ...

    Dec 5, 2009
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Being Me in a World Where 'Me' is Not Accepted

    Hi Jayleigh, I was going through your portfolio and I found this short story. I do not want to tell you that I LOVED IT because I don't want you ...

    Dec 5, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Breena (Twelve)

    Hey Jayleigh, Wow, I loved this chapter. Pink found the only nitpicks I had and that was easily remedied. I would also love to know how the fairies reacted to ...

    Dec 3, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Thorns & Roses [1]

    Hey Pink, Ok, I read your chapter and I'm ready for the review. Here are my nitpicks... His blond hair is soft and waves slightly as he moves. Referring to ...

    Dec 2, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Of Loss and Love (chp.7) [newly edited]

    Ah no! What a jerk! I hate Frederick! How very much like a man to assume it is the woman's fault that they cannot conceive. It is HIS fault, I'm ...

    Nov 30, 2009


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