borntobeawriter

Hey Kitx, here for the second review as promised. I hope the previous one was helpful :D I feel like I’m on the verge of a nervous break down. I’m ...

Hi there KitxKat, I'm Tanya, here to do a review. I have to agree with mmink that this chapter is a bit choppy but a good lesson on punctuation dialogue ...

Haha! It's my turn to be late. Sorry! I caught your message last night but if I had read it -quickly- I wouldn't have given you a proper review. Now, ...

Hey baby girl! Wow, Lauren's right; nice twist. Ok. Two things though. First, it doesn't make much sense to me that the grand-father is in his fifties unless he was ...

Hi there Snickerdooly, Here to do the review. Ok now, I noticed a lot of sentences who are in desperate need of commas. I won't go back to mention them ...

Hey there Durr, As Lena said, I prefered the fact that the second part was told by a character. That being said, I found it was one hell of an ...

Hey baby girl, Yup, I definitely enjoyed this one. I'm glad you explained how in only three weeks she was able to kick some serious ass. Only little nitpick: When ...

Ok, hi there MissMari and welcome to YWS! My name is Tanya and I'm here for your review. Let me start off by saying that this story intrigued me. It ...

Oh WOW! You were right to love this chapter; it's freakin' amazing baby girl! HAHA It had me laughing and groaning and chuckling and everything. Wonderful! This is all I ...

Hey baby girl, Well, the chapter's as good as when I read it. I did notice something though, My bed was relatively big in its queen size bed, but he ...

Hi there, Here for another review! "So, you're not going to forget about us right?" Cecilia's tone became more serious. "Of course how could I forget you guys? I'm going ...

Hey there Possibleintrovert, I'm here for your first review :D I took a hit of an ace and sat back in my chair. I held in the smoke until my ...

Hey little sister ! :D "What do you mean?" he asked all surprised, as though he didn't even know why I'd be angry. "I was aiming for the target; you ...

Hey Classy, it's me again! “The noises you heard came from a radio Aha! I was right! :D He had a small backpack hidden in the corner of our shelter, ...

Ok! Hi there Classy! Umm, I think that I'm slightly confused. I know I am! LOL Let me get this straight, ok. Mary woke up, met Joe and followed him ...