borntobeawriter

Lauren....Wow. It was an important even in the eyes of the remaining public, important enough to waste the few remaining building materials. event, maybe? She was even clothes in a ...

Hey baby girl, I'm back for more. I screamed awake, and almost fell off my bed if not for Tony pulling me by my waist I personally don't like the ...

Okay, wow, this is different. Hi there, rude of me not to introduce myself; I'm Tanya :D I didn't find anything to mention that bluewaterlily hadn't already but I'll tell ...

Hey there, I'm Tanya, here for a review. I'm not sure how I feel about this prologue. The beginning really pulled me in but near the middle, I was skimming. ...

Well there, wow! Hi Talulah, I'm Tanya. Honestly, I didn't find any mistakes so there's nothing to mention. I really enjoyed the setting of this story. Much different from Vampires ...

What? I'm actually first? lol. We should get a prize for when that happens :D Okay, well, Emma, once again, I found no grammar mistakes. This chapter felt more transitional ...

Be kind? Not likely :twisted: I'm sorry, did I say that outloud? lol Seriously, hey there, I'm Tanya, here for a review. Well, you've already been advised to separate your ...

Hey Lightdevil! I really liked this chapter! It was completely original and I caught myself smiling several times when the book/Svinx kept retracting what he was saying. "Wait, I'm sorry, ...

Helllllllo! Finally here!! Sorry about all that delay time, I've been so busy! But I'm here now. And frankly, I don't have much to say. It felt more like a ...

Hey there RH! Sorry for the delay but I actually spent the weekend away from my precious internet! *shocking!* :shock: the only nitpick I have is here : Your face ...

Hey Emma! Sorry for the delay, I spent the weekend on renovations. And, well, it's good for my sister's esteem is she's first, once in a while...;) Okay, besides the ...

Hey Emma, Your friendly first reviewer is here!! Haha, my sister was so mad when it got erased - from my laptop. But it never does it to me! (because ...

Woohoooooooo! Oh my, Emma! You really do have a gift for words. I probably liked this chapter more than any other. You described Kieran's grief so well, then his run ...

Hey Funky, I'm Tanya!! A lonesome balloon floated down steadily in the dark of night, its bright yellow exterior glowing against the dreary town. The owner of the balloon was ...

Hey Hiadel, I'm Tanya, here for a review! I was easedropping on the entire conversation about a foot away from their seats on the window's glass. eavesdropping Moving one leg ...