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Re: White Eyes (part one)
Hey there Ig, I'm Tanya, here for a review. I saw your chapter part something in the forum and decided to go back and review from the start. So here ...
Oct 24, 2010 -
Re: The Phoenix And The Flame
Hey there Em, I'm Tanya, here for a review :D I was at school when it happened. The event that caused the inevitable to happen. They said it was some ...
Oct 24, 2010 -
Re: The Lockets -- Chapter 2 [Snowflake]
Hey there Jash, Back for a review! First of all, congrats on this chapter, I really enjoyed it. I really like Snow's 'voice' in this one. I like her thoughts ...
Oct 24, 2010 -
Re: The Lockets -- Chapter I
Hey there Jash, I'm Tanya :D I've been meaning to review this for some time but I've never quite got around to it. First of all: your english is amazing. ...
Oct 24, 2010 -
Re: Call of the Dragon-Prologue Newly Revised
Hey Lily, Yay! A Dragon story! So far, it is interesting but I found it to be repetitive. Because you do not name them, it's constantly 'black dragon, white dragon, ...
Oct 16, 2010 -
Re: Untitled - part 4
Hey Addy, Haha, I see that Emma made it before me! And, really, I suggest you go and read her work if ever you have a bit of free time. ...
Oct 16, 2010 -
Re: Elle (Chapter 11, part 2,) *Re-written*
Hey Katie, Back again! This feeling of alone was horrible. I suggest replacing 'alone' by 'loneliness'. Makes more sense. The only left I could do was let this go Um, ...
Oct 16, 2010 -
Re: Till Death Do Us Apart-Chapter 1
Hey guys, Thanks for the PM! Okay, this is going to be brutally honest, ladies, but I really don't see the point of this chapter. I mean, after that awesome ...
Oct 14, 2010 -
Re: Keeper of the Stones: Black Dragons (15)
Haha, I was commenting on the previous chapter when I got the message for this one. Emma, we're meant for each other! Ok, so far no nitpicks but I wanted ...
Oct 13, 2010 -
Re: Untitled - part 3
Hey Addiction! (May I call you Addy?) It's Tanya, back again! “Well, I won’t lie; I do wish you’d stay longer. But I see that you’re mind is made up. ...
Oct 12, 2010 -
Re: Untitled - part 2
Well hey there Addiction, I'm Tanya, pleased to meet you *waves* Okay, I was going to read your third chapter when I noticed you were upset about nobody reading your ...
Oct 12, 2010 -
Re: Shattered Pieces: Prologue (EDITED!!!)
Hey there Rain, I'm Tanya, here for a review *waves* The dark brass bells rang and clung projecting their sorrowful sound across the grounds and into the blank dull sky. ...
Oct 12, 2010 -
Re: Elle (Chapter 11, part 2)
Hey Katieee! :D Long time no see, glad you're back! “What, Elle?” The way he says my name, almost like he were muttering a swear. Cold and under his breath. ...
Oct 11, 2010 -
Re: Fighters Promise, Ch. 4
Caitlin, glad you posted! Ok, I'm unsure of this chapter. I like it, that's for sure. I'm not sure if James -Blade- comes off too aggressive at first, and it ...
Oct 9, 2010 -
Re: A Shot of Arrogance (Chapter Eleven)
I'm thinking that I might stop posting after this... I'm not sure. I Oh no! Why? We love this Skins!! Please keep going! “Fine,” Ollie muttere , “I’ll be back ...
Oct 8, 2010
