borntobeawriter

Hey there Ultra! Tanya here, for a review :D After I while I found myself at a river and a decrepit old bridge a So I just sat at the ...

Hey there, back for the second part! First, you're going to have to reread everything slowly. You keep switching your tenses from past to present. Second, I'm wondering about the ...

Hey there Divides! I'm Tanya, here for a review. Because the grammar and such has already been taken care of, I'll simply give you my overall impression. The concept of ...

Wow, Kelsey. Wow. Wow. Haha. Well, I really don't know what else to say. You are quite the talented writer. Your words are powerful and to the point. Not too ...

Wow, Matt. (shorter ;)) I have absolutely no nitpicks, which is saying a lot for this piece. I have to agree with what Kelsey said; it'd be easier on the ...

Shubhi, thanks for asking for this review on my thread. Mom is happy :D The words slowly swooshed by me, me trying to grab them with all the force I ...

Wow, Angels. I just read the blog you wrote and decided to come read some of your work. You are the hollow man whose soul was carved and gutted by ...

Skinsy, Tis me! I'm sorry; I only just saw that you had posted this. And apparently, everyone has commented on it already. I don't have anything to add; my opinion ...

I absolutely love this. Unfortunately, I'm no good at reviewing poetry, but your words spoke to me. I think they will speak to every writer here. Nicely done :D Tanya

Isha! You've posted! Boo-ya! It wasn't difficult to cut the hair of a semi-conscious woman, but the crowd still cheered their amazment . woman? I thought she was a girl? ...

Bailey! 'Tis me! Why didn't you tell me you had another story going? Well, I should have checked myself, but still! I just went back and read the first three ...

Hey Leth! glad you posted another chapter of this :D Though Stella had no experience at judging a Lycerian’s age, she guessed he was pretty young, possibly serving his first ...

Ok, Pointe. Overall. I do not think you need to stop this story. It has serious potential. But you are going to have to find a way to fix it. ...

Don't be shy? But there's nothing to review :'( Seriously, couldn't you give yourself a little trouble to be bad at this? I wouldn't feel like such a useless smuck. ...

Well, Pointe, All the good reviews have already been done. But, if I were to say anything at all, is to compare your chapters to those you've reviewed. Try to ...