borntobeawriter

Tiger, this great! I think it's worth waiting for Kiss of Death if this is what you come up with. I love stories that speak of the begining of time. ...

Hey there Aqua, Well, Lady has already found the punctuation but I'll link something else that might help you. I thought this was a good beginning, an interesting way of ...

Wow, Orinette. First of all, you made me laugh with your request. Thanks for the flattery ;) I have to agree with Ranger Hawk. IF this was anyone else telling ...

Hey Day, Back for another review! First, I wanted to mention that the German is slightly distracting. You could say that he 'spat out the order in German' or something, ...

Hey there Ally, Thanks for the request :D Cade had certainly been trained well, allowing himto become one of the youngest and most respected members of the gang. space bar ...

Gotta love those elves! :D Seriously, thanks for posting. But I've found no nitpicks. I'm useless :'( I love your story and your writing style. Your characters are unique, but ...

Skinsy, tis me! A few questions: Is Will older or younger? How early does your supermarket open? Cause here, it doesn't open until 8. Why is WIll harassing Charlie to ...

Hey there Tabby! True, we don't know each other, but that can be easily remedied! I think you did a good job on the third person point of view, especially ...

Hey there, Day. Thanks for the request! You're right; I don't read HF but this was really good. Like Kiwi said, I found the end difficult to read. Nicely done. ...

Well, Spike, I really don't see what to say after reading Azila's great review! Haha, seriously! Nah, this was a great chapter! Setting aside my nitpicks that Azila already mentioned, ...

Hey there Boss, I'm so sorry for the delay; I somehow lost track of things in the past few days. I won't go into details with the nitpicking, because you've ...

Hello Wifey! I have to agree with Ofir, here. I love the beginning and end but did not like Luke's reaction to it all. I thought he was cold and ...

Hey EmoinPink! Thanks so much for the request, sorry for the delay! I really enjoyed this piece. I'm going to go and read the rest, though, because I'm a little ...

Oh man, Leth; you weren't kidding when you said it was long. But I'm always up for a challenge! *cracks knuckles* There was a heavy knock on the wooden door ...

Hey there River, Thanks for the request! I really enjoyed this piece. But I have to wonder. Is there a specific word count? If not, I suggest you elaborate a ...