borntobeawriter

Hey there Pointe, Ok, Pari did a great and very thorough review on the dialogue tags and punctuation. My issues go a little deeper. I'm reading this chapter and I'm ...

Hey there Pointe! Ok, well, once again, I find your story much better than Stargazer. The characters have better dialogue and interaction. I also don't remember her being wounded, and ...

Well, wowee, am I ever late! Yuri, what else can I add to this? haha. Well, I can give you my opinion, right? I loved it. Absolutely loved it. I'm ...

Hey there Pari! Thanks for the request. Well, I'm sorry I'm so late getting into it: I haven't been on much this week. It's funny to read this because it's ...

Hey Flower, Thanks for the request! This was definitely different from what I'm used to reading around here, but I liked it. Something felt off about it, but I'm not ...

Well, Day, you've done it again. It's obvious you like history and you pull it off so well. You are quite talented, so very talented, that you manage to convey ...

Hey there Coral, Thanks for the request! Well, prose. I'm not sure how much I can help you with that, but I'll definitely give it a try. Might I also ...

Hey there Shubhi. Mommy's finally here :D She is too like me, from before twenty years. Wrong phrasing. "She is much like I was over twenty years ago." As fragile ...

Hey Pointe, Congrats on starting a new novel. Ok. Well, I'm not sure what I can add that Skins and Pink haven't already said. First, I agree with everything they ...

Hey Lauren! I guess my sister baet me to it *grumbles*. Don't have any issue with this chapter, my sister already found the nitpicks I had. Especially referring to the ...

Hi there Leanne, Tanya here, as requested! :D Emensol Lee was leaning on the wall, he was wet, his boots where looking brown , as if he had been jumping ...

Hey there Orinette! I actually had to go back and read your summary of the story because I couldn't remember who Kael was! haha. Don't mind me. Well, I am ...

Hey there Bunny. I've read this over and I thought it was a great idea, a great chapter. I won't do a detailed review because Pink was rather detailed with ...

Hey there Pointe, Ok, I noticed quite a few mistakes on the way down here, but it would be easy to go over and find them. I want to comment ...

OH Lord, Day, This was good writing. This was freaking good writing! I can't believe there aren't more people following this; it deserves to be read in mass numbers! YOu ...