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Re: Under rewriting progress
Hey there Sweets! Just saw the link you posted on the page. I would appreciate it if next time, you post a request in our WRFF thread (usually in our ...
Jan 23, 2011 -
Re: Snow- Ch. 3
Hey Pointe, Back for chappy three! Ok, I don't have much to say that RH hasn't said already but it's worth repeating: there are too many songs here. You can ...
Jan 23, 2011 -
Re: Snow- chapter 2
Hey there Pointe, Ok, I read the preface and first chapter. I want to comment on the preface, first. I totally agree with RH about it being superfluous and you ...
Jan 23, 2011 -
Re: Stop and Stare (Part 5)
Oh Lord, What else is there to say after these fantastic reviews? Well. First, I also saw last night that you had posted, but I was on Ipod and knew ...
Jan 23, 2011 -
Re: Keeper of the Stones: Black Dragons (18)
Love, love, love! Emma, tis me! Yes, me! Your faithful #1 reviewer. So glad you plowed through your writers' block. The result is definitely worth it! I love the interaction ...
Jan 20, 2011 -
Re: Fallen Angels: Aren's Tale Ch 7
Bailey, tis me! So sorry for the delay, but even for you, I wouldn't do a review on my bloody ipod. How Susie does it. . . I don't know. ...
Jan 20, 2011 -
Re: Rahiem: Prologue
Hey there Blade, My name is Tanya and I'm Spitfire's sister. You should have seen her face when she was through with reading your prologue. She was awed, mouth gaping ...
Jan 20, 2011 -
Re: Pens and Knives [Preface, Prologue and Ch. 1]
Hey there Pointe, Well, Pari did another incredible job while reviewing your piece. What more is there to add? Hmmm. I'M not sure if this completely works for the contest, ...
Jan 20, 2011 -
Re: One Country, Two Worlds [Part 1]
Hey there LittlePrincess, Tanya here, as requested! I'm very sorry for the delay, but better late than never, right? ;) At first, I thought you'd sent me a poem and ...
Jan 20, 2011 -
Re: Angels - Chapter 4
Orinette, I'm here! Sorry for the delay, but my schedule has been off the wall lately. Also, of course I want to keep reading your story! You're brilliant, my dear! ...
Jan 20, 2011 -
Re: Removed
Well, unfortuntely, I've already read this. Which means I can't say anything constructive. Nothing's changed, I still enjoy this new style you're writing with. I'm curious to know what will ...
Jan 16, 2011 -
Re: Hide and Seek (Chapter One)
Real men wear Pink! haha! “Are you gay?” My father asked. lower case. I thought this was a good opening line. “Why the hell did you buy that crap? Throw ...
Jan 16, 2011 -
Re: Wishes Enveloped In Paper Aeroplanes
Hey there Iceprincess, First of all, thank you for the request. It was such a nice way of asking :D Second, I am awed by your talent and by this ...
Jan 16, 2011 -
Re: The Magi {ch. 6}
Hey there Pointe, Well, what to say? You already got two great reviews. I'm not sure what I can tell you that I haven't said throughout all your other chapters: ...
Jan 16, 2011 -
Re: Know I'm Here(3)
Daughter! Sorry for the lateness of my reply. Yuri already got the biggest nitpicks I had. My biggest issue, though, is nothing you can't fix easily. In the new prologue, ...
Jan 16, 2011
