borntobeawriter

Hey there Ben! I saw you posted this a couple days ago but didn't have the time to review. Well, this was short. The writing flowed well and it was ...

*Le gasp* I wasn't first! It never occured to me I wouldn't be. Let me take a minute to compose myself. *a minute passes*. Ok, I'm good now ;) First ...

Orinette, hi! Once more, it is never a hardship to read your work: the more, the better! :D This was a very good chapter, as usual. I liked the emotion ...

Hey there Kafka! Well, I am awed and amazed by your descriptions. The details you set into the story seem effortless and just flow off the page so easily. I ...

Emmmmmmmmaaaaaaaaa Tis me, your friendly neighbourhood stalker. I am so glad to be first again (coughs), seriously. I wasn't sure where you were going to take this story. I mean, ...

ooooooooooooookayyyyyyyyyy Why am I the first? Not that I'm complaining. Just wondering. On to the review? (Why Cat? Seriously, why? Why not Dog or Llama or Pig? Mouse, fly, spider? ...

Hey there Jojo! Thanks for the request. :D First of all, congrats on this great piece of work! First try? Kudos to you! I thought this piece was fantastic, but ...

Hey there Once! It's really funny that you should ask for a review because Spitfire is my sister and I was with her when she gave you yours. haha ;) ...

Skiiiinsy! Thank you for posting :lol:

Hey there Amie, Sorry for the delay. I actually wasn't sure whether I'd reread this or not because I got quite a few requests. But I had a bit of ...

Daughter, did you notice you were briefly featured again? I did - I'm the mom, of course! Now, you're up for more featuredness, of course! I wouldn't expect anything less ...

Hey there Tayler! Ok, first off, spoilers are great, but I suggest you put this at the end of your chapter. Because the whole time, we're really paying attention to ...

Ma fille, un autre chapitre! First, I didn't get either a LOTR vibe (sorry, Emmaaaaaaaa!) or an Eragon one. I see what Emma means, but Jot is so unique you ...

Skinsy, tis me! Okay, as usual, loved the chapter. Zoey's voice is so unique and interesting. It's a wonder you manage to make Charlie just a bit interesting ;) Besides, ...

Hey there Tayler! It's my pleasure to review this again! I thought this was nicely done. The imagery was vivid, the details weren't too much. The prologue had the right ...