borntobeawriter

Ok now. This is the uh, third editing I believe. I really wanted to thank everyone profusely for their help. I'm thrilled that this story is getting such great reviews. ...

Hey everyone!!Thanks to all for the great reviews. There's a thing or two I'd like to point out:1) Yes, it really is a fantasy story. Give it a chapter or ...

Chapter 3 “. . . She know?” “Not . . . holding off . . .” “Will . . . Okay?” “Yes. Look!”I woke to a wet face and an ...

Ok, guys. FOurth chapter here, hope you enjoy it, much is explained in this one and the next.Also, I wanted to thank you all for the great reviews and comments. ...

Ok, I was waiting to post this so that everyone had the chance to chance up but my sister demanded -I'd say 'nag' but it's too strong a word- that ...

Ok now guys (gals), I need help here. I had to find a way to describe the history without it seeming as an info dump. I don't know if I ...

Ok guys. You've been patient with me and I wanted to thank you. I know you've had no plot to work with so far, not sure where this is going. ...

Ok guys. Next chapter is up. I just wanted to mention that Riley and Shanna won't commit to anything just yet. I must admit that I tried to get them ...

Chapter 10The four beasts facing us were huge and snarling. The beasties’ coats were dark and matted with filth. Their eyes were red and round, like twin marbles. The hounds ...

Voilà! Enjoy! Chapter 11The next morning I found Scott in the library. No sign of Riley. Not that I looked. Much.Scott was reading a book on a sofa near the ...

Ok guys, thanks for the great reviews! I'm sort of stuck on chapter 14 but 12 is done and ready for a critique! I hope you enjoy it because I ...

Okay guys, your thoughts on this one? I hope you like it better than the last...Chapter 13The slamming of the heavy wooden door resounded with such finality that my breath ...

Chapter 14Scott and Riley were quiet for several minutes. Scott was now leaning against the tree and Riley had finally sat down, his gaze trained on the ground. Scott was ...

Chapter 15In many ways, the village looked exactly like the one I’d spotted the first day on my way to Kimera. It had an abandoned feel to it; no children ...

Chapter 16For a few blissful minutes following my arousing, I didn’t think of anything but Riley’s warm body against mine. I loved the feel of him, loved feeling so secure ...

Ok hey guys! Well, for starters, thanks for all the great reviews. When I'll this is done, I'm going to have to go back over my story with a fine-toothed ...

Chapter 18I was flying, soaring through the hot, dry air. I couldn’t breathe and I was dizzy; not feelings I had ever associated with flying. When I suddenly dropped hard ...

As I write my chapters, I feel conflicting emotions. I am glad that my story is nearing its end, but I don't want to finish writing it. I love my ...

Chapter 20My eyes fluttered open as I tried to figure out where I was. I was on a bed, underneath covers. In my old room? A soft smile spread across ...

Okay guys, there's only one left after this one...................Chapter 21The trial had been going on for two hours. They called it a council meeting, but it still felt like a ...

And so...The last chapter. I want to thank you reviewers who have followed me throughout this process. I have grown under your tutelage. Thank you from the bottom of my ...

Spoiler! : Hey there everyone! A few of you have followed this novel when I posted in. I'm slowly editing it, and I'm considering it for Lauren's contest. Have a ...

Spoiler! : Ok guys. I hadn't originally wanted to post this edited version because many of you have read it already. But I need feedback and motivation and who better ...

For those who are interested, I've created a page! Spoiler! : Where we left off: Shanna brought Riley home when his master didn't pick him up. She told him about ...

Spoiler! : Well now, for those who've read the previous version, well, not much has changed in this chapter Chapter 4The lights were on in every room of my parents’ ...

Spoiler! : Ok. Sorry, there are supposed to be thoughts in italics and such but my laptop hates me today. So I can't make them work. Thanks for your help ...

Spoiler! : Ok! For some reason, I still can't scroll down to put stuff in italics. Please bear with me. I just realised that chappy 6 was way too long ...