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Re: My Brother's News
Hey! Um im kinda new at this so.. but i really wanted to review your story so here it goes :) First off I wanna say how much I agree ...
Mar 3, 2011 -
Re: Which Way Prologue and Chapter One
I thought this was a good chapter. Though its kinda a little short however straight to the point. One thing that my teacher always tells me is to expand the ...
Mar 1, 2011
