bonafide

Metal fork, sick yellow. Scrambled eggs sprinkled with salt, the critique at the tip of your tongue. The topic is so direct that you are hidden behind your wall of ...

Let's fix some mechanics! Nothing more then 2 (I'd write out "two") dimensional [s]a[/s] shadow on a wall the light you see in the morning i (Capitalize?) quickly burn out ...

I'd say Ursala, but that'd prove to be useless, as I doubt I'd be able to get her to a fishbowl large enough in time. So I suppose Alladin. I ...

Firstly, repeating the "you still love him" message at the end of every stanza was redundant, and not particularly creatively versed, so I'd suggest you cut that format. You can't ...

I appreciate your critique, Incandescence, but I believe your target for my error is far offhand. I know exactly what I am trying to communicate. It's lost in translation, which ...

Shade. It's cooler. --Anna Would you rather have glow sticks as fingers or pom-poms as hands?

She took her raisin hands and brushed coiled scars and barbed curls from my hitchhiking eyes. "Destination is always nowhere in a hurry." Peddlers whistle so fast only dog's ears ...

Lines it could definitely do without: my life it sucked. No worries, I'll laugh it off. it's cool, it's cool: but no I've had enough! This words don't express the ...

....a train lowing What does it mean, to low? in a star-plucked field, This is pretty, but it means very little, besides perhaps "separated from fate". But judging by the ...