bluitch

thank you for the reviews! I apologize for the mistakes in punctuation...I'm kind of new to this whole poetry thing, so hopefully it'll get better and I'm glad you guys ...

I really like the concept this poem has, and all the emotion behind it... I don't think you need to make any improvements! it's a great poem! I love it!

I'm not so proud of most of the things I've done, I'm not proud of what I've done to you. I couldn't tell you why I do the things I ...

I really like your lyrics. I really wish I could hear this with music because I think it would be a great song. I don't think you really need to ...

Not that smiling at other people's pain is a good thing, but we've all been through it. That's the kind of thing that makes a song good - we have ...

It took me a while to realize that you're nowhere close to what I'm looking for And it took me even longer to work up the courage to shut that ...

I really liked it...even though I do find it almost disturbing how easily I can relate to things like this. My overall favorite part was the second stanza When the ...

She doesn't want to pretend anymore No one really knows who she is They know the sarcastic tomboy that doesn't let anyone in She doesn't really have friends anymore Not ...