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Re: I love you
The way you described their love for each other was so real, especially for a short story. Just imagine what you could do with a romance novel! I can`t wait ...
Jun 6, 2010 -
Re: the beggining of Fighting Gods, Saving Lives, and.......
Great story! I love the way you the characters so the readers can visualize them clearly, and how you vividly describe their relationship. The dialogue is also good. Though I`d ...
Jun 5, 2010 -
Re: Saving Lilly-Beginning redone
Great story! There are a few suggestions I would like to make. For example the second sentence in the first paragraph would be better if you combined the second sentence ...
Jun 5, 2010