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the mouse is not really a mouse... its a rat... and its mine :P haha. So that's why there's a rat on there... :wink: Oh... that makes sense.

This is a very colorful photo. The bird's feathers are very vibrant. My only complaint is that the bird's tail feathers and the background were a little blurry. Other than ...

I agree with every one else, these pictures are great! The rose is gorgeous! I love how the rose is the main focus of the picture; you can see the ...

bluewaterlily here to review your story. red=corrections blue=comments green=delete Joslynn and I huddled together, nibbling our already stubby fingernails. Abigail and Vanessa sat on their bunks read

bluewaterlily at your service for a review. red=corrections blue=comments Someone was chasing me. We were in a dark forest. Fog was creeping around me. Leaves rustled and , I heard ...

Well, this was certainly the most unique play I have ever was strange,but in a good way. An author's job is to create original characters, and mission accomplished! All the ...

bluewaterlily at your service to review your work. red=corrections blue=comments I know the part with the old man is short and unsatisfactory--I'm planning on expanding that sometime soon. For now, ...

bluewaterlily here to review your story. red=corrections green= delete blue=comments The Cherry Wood Forest surrounded me as I ran. My legs throbbed , and my short breaths came less and ...

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bluewaterlily here to review your story. Red=corrections Blue=comments *I wasn't too sure about the rating; there's blood and emotional trauma in this first chapter, so i guess watch out for ...

bluewaterlily here to review your story. Red=-corrections Blue=Comments Green=Delete Purple=Capitalize ***Okay, so this is my first story on here and it's a true story. It's more or less a rough ...

I like this story, and I`d like to read more. I guess Abbey is one of the good girls, and it`s real obvious that Jake is one of the"bad boys." ...

bluewaterlily here to reveiw your work. red=correcions blue=comments An old piece with a few tweaks. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

I like this story; it`s really good. Kadety and Justin seem like interesting characters, so do Ryan and Allyson. Though I think you should work on Allyson`s reaction when she ...

bluewaterlily here to review your story. Red=corrections Blue=comments [quote="Riveneye"]Okay here's Story number four in the collection of short stories I'm working on. I've formatted it right this t