bluewaterlily

Hi, ultraviolet! Here is the review I promised you. red=corrections blue=comments Hence the name "Pebble Races" . That period should be inside the quotation marks. Or you could do it ...

How do you upload an animated avatar? :| I think you have to find one on the internet and make sure you save it as a .gif file, as opposed ...

Cool! You did a great job sketching it and shading it. :)

Hello, I'm bluewaterlily, and I will be reviewing your story. Red=corrections Blue=comments Gunfire could be heard throughout the night darkened city. There should be a hyphen between night and darken

Very pretty. I like how on the left side of the picture, the sky and the water have such lovely shades of blue. And I love how the tree on ...

Hi, I'm bluewaterlily, and I'll be reviewing your story. red=corrections blue=comments With a graceful twist of her body, she leapt off the branch and sailed downwards, the cool wind filling ...

Hi, I'm bluewaterlily and I'll be reviewing your pictures. 1) I like the background, and the colors are nice. 2) I like how you took a picture of a side ...

I'm bluewaterlily, and I'll be reviewing your story today. red=corrections blue=comments Muscles tense, Arrisa Torrow zoned in on the path in front of her self , and tuned out the ...

I'm not good at reviewing poetry, but I think this was a very nice poem. You did a really good job with the imagery; the descriptions were very vivid. I ...

Hi, kr1117, I'm bluewaterlily and I will be reviewing your story today. red=corrections blue=comments “We will continue traveling along the edge of the Teirre forest until we reach Alden. When ...

Here is your review as requested. Sorry it took so long, but I had to run alot of errands. Any way, onto the review. Mrs. Cole looked up to her ...

I'm here to review your story. From the pale spectres of the Northern Shores, to honey skinned sailors of the Sister Isles, half of Quilantien rallied to the man in ...

You know you're a writer when... 1) You have conversations with your characters and your characters are your best friends (And no, I'm not crazy :shock: ) 2)You get in ...

It's my superpower,

"Pssh. I've done that loads of times. Sure, I was dreaming, but really, what's the difference?" --Megan, from the book I'm posting on here, My Life as a Human Dreamcatcher ...