bluewaterlily

Okay, and good luck. :)

I like this poem, very interesting. I've never read a poem from the perspective of a dead person. The descriptions were good, and so were the emotions. I have nothing ...

Hi, I'm bluewaterlily, and I'll be reviewing your poem today. Your poem was good and it had a good theme that was conveyed strongly. Your poem also had a nice ...

Hi, I'm bluewaterlily and I'll be reviewing your picture today. Love the title BTW. Now onto the review. Sure, it's a little blurry, but that can be overlooked considering how ...

Hi, I'm bluewaterlily, and I'll be reviewing your poem today.The emotions were conveyed strongly in this poem, and your descriptions were nice. However, the flow seemed a little choppy which ...

Hi, kr117! bluewaterlily here to review your story. I felt grief for the poor civilian who stumbles over the scene, having to witness my destruction. Stumbles should be stumbled. “You ...

Hi, I'm bluewaterlily, and I'll be reviewing your poem today. Girl: I would love to be a fish, And swim through all the seas! Or be a bird who flies ...

Wow, this was very detailed. Your descriptions were really good. Just from that introduction, readers got a good idea of the setting and of course the classes. One question though, ...

Hi, I'm bluewaterlily, and I'll be reviewing your story. Thomas the footman could do his job and I rolled out onto the grass. There should be a comma after and. ...

This is one of my first attempts at poetry. Since I have nothing else to say, here it goes: Dark clouds hover above my head They follow where ever I ...

This was a nice poem, especially for your first try. Your imagery was nice, and you had good metaphors and similes. However, it did feel a slight bit repetitive at ...

This poem was good and has a lot of potential. The imagery was good and the emotions, fairly strong. However, sometimes the flow seemed faltered. Here's an example: In that ...

You're welcome, and no problem. If you need a review, just send me a P.M. Good luck with your writing~bluewaterlily. :)

LOL! I love it! Very unique. Who would have thought Hermione would have fallen for Draco? Good work and keep at it~bluewaterlily. :D

Hi. I'm bluewaterlily, and I'll be commenting on your pictures. Traditional: This one is my second favorite. The coloring, shading, and sketching or nice. Edited: I love this one; it's ...