bluewaterlily

Hi, kr. Here to review your story. Firstly, I must say this is one of your best chapters yet. The more I read the better Elle gets, and the more ...

I'm willing to work with anyone who writes romance and/or fantasy. Just no vampire stories, please. If you'd like to work with me than send me a PM or write ...

Hi, Tanya. Here is your review as requested. For a full precious moment, she inhaled the salty smell of the ocean, tilted her head back and let the breeze cool ...

Hi, Bex! Welcome to YWS! I write a lot of fantasy too. If you need a review help with a story, or just someone to talk to, then feel free ...

Hey, kr. These are beautiful. 1) This is my favorite. I think you should enter this one in the contest. Though maybe you should add more petals and leaves. On ...

I liked it. The emotions were good, and the flow seemed all right. Though there was one thing that confused me. Is this why peace, is like a myth be ...

Will do. :)

Yeah, Tanya. I totally agree with smaur. Your writing is really good. And I hope you didn't think I was too harsh or anything, because I really like this story. ...

Okay, Rascalover. I'm on it.

Hi, ScarlettFire. I'm going to be reviewing your poem today. Cool user name by the way. Now onto the review. Storm A brilliant sun with skies so blue, The day ...

Hi. borntobeawriter. I'm here to review your story. Maya ran, branches slapping at her face, bushes snagging the soft cotton of her long white dress, heartbeat echoing the sound of ...

Thanks, seeminglymeaningless. I'm so glad someone finally requested a review; you're my first costumer(I don't know what word to use :wink: :P ) But, I'll get to it tomorrow since ...

Doesn't anyone want a free review? :(

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If you're in need of a free review then you've come to the right place. What I review: Fantasy Romance Art/Photography Poetry(I'm not the best, but I'm getting better) General ...