bluewaterlily

Hey @fraey, thanks so much for your kind words. This was my first try at a narrative autobiographical poem for NaPo, so I'm glad you enjoyed it. :) I've never ...

oh my gosh! Your descriptions are so beautiful and vivid. I love this line so much which give, like scaffolds, me new scope and height

Thank you so much @Coffeeism!

the hardest ground to stand on is no man's land straddling the borders between two regions i still haven't gotten used to navigating as a kid I didn't know we ...

Thanks @Ventomology. Trying to do my best to catch up. Just have a lot going on.

So beautiful and lovely

I love the format of your first poem, and I love how visceral your second poem is. I think my favorite line was "while my fingers jitter like a sickly ...

morning ritual of a 20 something year old in your 20s, you will get used to vacancy: a vacant house, vacant bed, vacant heart sometimes, you will wake from dreams ...

Amazing! :O Love this!

Amazing start alliyah! I love the format and the imagery as well as the background! Can't wait to see what you have in store for the rest of your NaPo! ...

Honestly, I don't know if it was meant to be a theme. It was just coincidental I guess in reaction to today's events in my life. But it could be ...

@fraey Thanks!

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So beautiful!

Beautiful imagery! You're off to a great start, Blue!