bluewaterlily

Hey Ura. Finally I'm here to review your story. Sorry for the delay, by the way. Anwyn swallowed her nausea forced herself to not look away. Forced should be forcing. ...

All because Eric had kissed Melody last night, people were treating her differently. One: people didn’t treat her like she was as invisible and nonexistent as a ghost. And two, ...

As Melody was leaving and getting into her car, her phone went off. She pulled out her phone and saw that her aunt Mary’s number flash across the screen. She ...

Melody was at her locker getting book and stuffing them into her bag when she noticed Eric walking up to her. He leaned against the locker next to hers and ...

Solvy this was good. :) Like for example, that one day my boyfriend was ignoring me. I told him that the mall's security guard was following me around after saying ...

“Thanks,” Melody replied, the compliment making her smile even more. “Now I have something to ask you,” Eric said. “What is it?” Melody asked. “It’s probably not important, but why ...

Melody was in the cafeteria. Like usual, she pushed her food around her tray, not eating. Though it was more of jabbing her at food with her fork. She was ...

As Melody took her seat next to Lauren in math, Ruby stalked up to her, a furious expression pinching her face. Melody rolled her eyes. Great, what did I do ...

As Melody walked into math class, she noticed the strangest things. One: Ruby and her Clones weren’t sitting together; in fact, the Clones were sitting as far away from Ruby ...

Melody walked away, shaking her head. She should have known that Eric of all people wasn’t going to understand. As if he would know what it’s like to lose not ...

Melody followed Lauren into Casey’s house, still wondering how Lauren managed to convince her to come to the party. Melody didn’t really do people and she certainly didn’t parties. So ...

The bell was about to ring. Melody dried the remainder of tears. She peered at her reflection in the mirror. Puffy eyes ringed in red stared back at her. She ...

The next day during study hall Melody passed Jeffery in the hall. She sighed. Jeffery still hadn’t returned her calls or text messages. She approached him and blocked his way ...

Melody and Eric looked down at their scripts. The stage directions said, Romeo takes Juliet by the hand. Wordlessly, Eric gently took Melody’s hand into his. It weirded Melody out, ...

Melody and Eric looked down at their scripts. The stage directions said, Romeo takes Juliet by the hand. Wordlessly, Eric gently took Melody’s hand into his. It weirded Melody out, ...