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bluewaterlily

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  • Archive Re: To Love or Not To Love: A Romeo and Juliet Parody

    Along with the other English classes, Melody made her way into the auditorium. She wondered what would happen to the play since Eric wasn’t at school. As far as she ...

    May 27, 2011
  • Archive Re: To Love or Not To Love: A Romeo and Juliet Parody

    When Melody got home, her aunt was standing at the door, arms folded and lips pressed into a thin, straight line. Even though her aunt looked dissatisfied-as usual- but Mary’s ...

    May 26, 2011
  • Archive Re: To Love or Not To Love: A Romeo and Juliet Parody

    The next day at school, Melody couldn’t find Eric anywhere. Between classes, she saw Eric’s friends in the hall, but she didn’t see Eric. She noticed that they had worried ...

    May 21, 2011
  • Archive Re: Apollo's Band and Artemis's Hunters*started*

    Name: Iva Age: 16 Gender: Female Team: Artemis Appearance: See below. Personality: Neither a leader nor a follower, she just goes by her own rules. She is serious, reserved, independent, ...

    May 18, 2011
  • Archive Re: To Love or Not To Love: A Romeo and Juliet Parody

    Melody couldn’t believe her luck. Her aunt and uncle had to go to a meeting or something involving the Van Holdens’ lawsuit. Thank you, Van Holdens. They were reluctant to ...

    May 17, 2011
  • Archive Re: To Love or Not To Love: A Romeo and Juliet Parody

    Melody was at her locker when Eric approached, a huge self-satisfied smirk on his face. She assumed that the grin on his face was because he had worked things out ...

    May 12, 2011
  • Archive Re: To Love or Not To Love: A Romeo and Juliet Parody

    Without knocking, Mary entered Melody’s room. Melody felt a surge of annoyance. Would it kill her to knock? This is why I should keep the door locked. Melody was considering ...

    May 8, 2011
  • Archive Re: To Love or Not To Love: A Romeo and Juliet Parody

    As Melody was getting home from the party, her phone went off. Lauren’s number flashed across the screen. “Hey, Lauren,” Melody said. “Hey, Melody. I know it’s late but it’s ...

    May 5, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: [deleted]

    Hi Tamara. :) Sorry for the late review. When you wake in the morning's rush I think wake would sound better as awake. But other than that your poem was ...

    Apr 30, 2011
  • WRFF Archive Re: The Review Bin

    Ish when you have the time could you review my two poems? Thanks.

    Apr 29, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Starlight

    Hi Knightly. :) I saw you posted and after reading this I decided to review your poem. I wish the stardust in our souls Will shine with all it’s might ...

    Apr 29, 2011
  • Archive Re: To Love or Not To Love: A Romeo and Juliet Parody

    As Melody walked into the house, all eyes turned on her. Kelley was gossiping and laughing with her followers when she noticed Melody. She approached her with a huge fake ...

    Apr 28, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: A Siren's Soliloquy

    This was beautifully written. Sorry, I'm not help, but I don't have anything to say about improving it. Good job with it. Can't wait to see more of your work. ...

    Apr 28, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Withering Beauty

    Once a glorious flower The red rose withers Its petals falling Like leaves in autumn Once a tall proud stem Is now stooped and shriveled Glossy emerald green now brown ...

    Apr 28, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Song of the Siren

    Dark hair swaying like seaweed A Siren sits perched on a rock Shrouded in a fine mist She opens her mouth to sing Her voice fills the air A high ...

    Apr 28, 2011


A man hears what he wants to hear and disregards the rest.
— Paul Simon