bluewaterlily

Hi Veritas. :) Welcome to YWS. You'll love it here. And let me just say that's amazing that you've finished two novels, published a volume of poetry, and have been ...

Hey Ish. :) Firstly, I'd like to say I loved this chapter. You wrote it very well. Now onto the few nitpicks. I noticed a few spelling errors. His legs ...

Soon the bell rang for sixth period and Melody hurried off to her next class, Health. Boring, but slightly better than history class. She wondered what stupid project they would ...

Melody knew just how Eric felt. The only time she ever felt alive was when she was playing her music...and when she was Eric. Not that she would say that. ...

Hi Katarina. I just want to say that this is a wonderful poem. The imagery is beautiful and so is the way you wrote this poem. Sorry I don't have ...

Very pretty.

Great poem, JoJo. Definitely one of the best and funnies poems I have ever have read.The message of the poem couldn't be truer. Great job and keep it up.

Hi Scarlet. :) Here as requested. I probably won't go into too much depth since you've already gotten so many good reviews, but I'll do my best to give you ...

Melody couldn’t help but be a little surprised when Eric had called her his girlfriend. Deep down, she knew it was kind of obvious, but it was still surprising said ...

Melody was in the backstage room thinking about how she was going to tell Eric what Jeffery said. But she wasn’t so sure she wanted she wanted to tell Eric-at ...

“Okay,” Mrs. Bing, said rubbing her hands together. “Instead of working on a scene with Romeo and Juliet like we usually do, we’re going to do something a little different ...

I'm into rock and pop but country comes in a close a second.

I prefer hardcover only because I don't have an e-reader yet...

For a moment, Melody just stared at Eric in shock. Guiltily, Eric was looking at her, waiting for her to say something. Melody still didn’t know what to say. She ...

Three days later, Eric was back at school. Melody was in the hallway near her locker when she saw Eric approaching. She was so relieved to see him. She would ...