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bluewaterlily

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  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: Rumpelstiltskin and other hungry men

    hearts wilt faster than flowers The Beast is angry again. Angry at Beauty. He has given her the best chambers in the castle, the best food, the best servants, the ...

    Apr 8, 2020
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: Rumpelstiltskin and other hungry men

    So I'm behind on responding to comments, but I hope every person who left a comment or has liked or read my poems knows how much I appreciate it. @Holysocks ...

    Apr 5, 2020
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: this tender self

    Lavvie, I love how tight the form of your poems are without compromising description or emotion. I can feel the iciness of a melting winter in "Northern Revival" and I ...

    Apr 4, 2020
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: snapshots of a life I thought I knew

    Another beautiful poem, Princess! I love the nostalgia in this poem and especially that ending. Very true.

    Apr 4, 2020
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: the names of all things

    Arcticus, I'm always in awe of pretty much everything you write. Your poems are beautiful, nostalgic. The way you employ language is simply magical. You have such an understanding and ...

    Apr 3, 2020
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: Rumpelstiltskin and other hungry men

    Peter Pan is at it again Peter Pan is at it again, prowling the windows of sad girls with shadows for faces large enough to rival his own shadow. He ...

    Apr 3, 2020
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: Rumpelstiltskin and other hungry men

    even princes can be gilded (and so can their hearts) He spins me dizzy around the ballroom and this is what I thought it felt like to be to be ...

    Apr 3, 2020
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: Rumpelstiltskin and other hungry men

    Thansk so much Lavvie! And I feel the same! I'm loving your therme and an't wait to read more of your poetry!

    Apr 3, 2020
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: An Endangered Species of Flightless Bird

    To this day, this one of my favorite NaPo threads on YWS. I still think about this thread a lot and I remember two years ago during NaPo eagerly waking ...

    Apr 3, 2020
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: this tender self

    Hi Napo partner! Lavvie, I love your theme and of the teaser poem/excerpt you have about the tender self. Just from reading that snippet and the first poem you wrote ...

    Apr 2, 2020
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: snapshots of a life I thought I knew

    Stunning imagery throughout, Princess. I love the line "the sky was crowning."

    Apr 2, 2020
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: Rumpelstiltskin and other hungry men

    Thanks so much @PrincessInk!

    Apr 2, 2020
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: Rumpelstiltskin and other hungry men

    Thanks @Arcticus!

    Apr 2, 2020
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: weathered, yes, but still standing

    Niteowl, I love your poem. I'm in total awe at the aching nostalgia of it and also how you're able to control the form of your poem and your line ...

    Apr 2, 2020
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: Rumpelstiltskin and other hungry men

    when you don't wish upon stars Prince Charming came to the foot of my tower last night, as he threw pebbles at the window. He cast sad glances at me, ...

    Apr 2, 2020


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