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Re: Rumpelstiltskin and other hungry men
hearts wilt faster than flowers The Beast is angry again. Angry at Beauty. He has given her the best chambers in the castle, the best food, the best servants, the ...
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Re: Rumpelstiltskin and other hungry men
So I'm behind on responding to comments, but I hope every person who left a comment or has liked or read my poems knows how much I appreciate it. @Holysocks ...
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Re: this tender self
Lavvie, I love how tight the form of your poems are without compromising description or emotion. I can feel the iciness of a melting winter in "Northern Revival" and I ...
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Re: snapshots of a life I thought I knew
Another beautiful poem, Princess! I love the nostalgia in this poem and especially that ending. Very true.
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Re: the names of all things
Arcticus, I'm always in awe of pretty much everything you write. Your poems are beautiful, nostalgic. The way you employ language is simply magical. You have such an understanding and ...
Apr 3, 2020 -
Re: Rumpelstiltskin and other hungry men
Peter Pan is at it again Peter Pan is at it again, prowling the windows of sad girls with shadows for faces large enough to rival his own shadow. He ...
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Re: Rumpelstiltskin and other hungry men
even princes can be gilded (and so can their hearts) He spins me dizzy around the ballroom and this is what I thought it felt like to be to be ...
Apr 3, 2020 -
Re: Rumpelstiltskin and other hungry men
Thansk so much Lavvie! And I feel the same! I'm loving your therme and an't wait to read more of your poetry!
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Re: An Endangered Species of Flightless Bird
To this day, this one of my favorite NaPo threads on YWS. I still think about this thread a lot and I remember two years ago during NaPo eagerly waking ...
Apr 3, 2020 -
Re: this tender self
Hi Napo partner! Lavvie, I love your theme and of the teaser poem/excerpt you have about the tender self. Just from reading that snippet and the first poem you wrote ...
Apr 2, 2020 -
Re: snapshots of a life I thought I knew
Stunning imagery throughout, Princess. I love the line "the sky was crowning."
Apr 2, 2020 -
Re: Rumpelstiltskin and other hungry men
Thanks so much @PrincessInk!
Apr 2, 2020 -
Re: Rumpelstiltskin and other hungry men
Thanks @Arcticus!
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Re: weathered, yes, but still standing
Niteowl, I love your poem. I'm in total awe at the aching nostalgia of it and also how you're able to control the form of your poem and your line ...
Apr 2, 2020 -
Re: Rumpelstiltskin and other hungry men
when you don't wish upon stars Prince Charming came to the foot of my tower last night, as he threw pebbles at the window. He cast sad glances at me, ...
Apr 2, 2020
