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Eternal, thanks so much! I'm really glad to hear that you enjoyed both my Wendy Darling poems and my poetry in general! I don't know how original my take on ...

The Lost Daughter of Wendy Darling Wendy Darling cannot tame her daughter any more than she can tame her daughter’s curls. Her daughter was born with a heart stricken By ...

PrincessInk, I love your imagery and the musical way you personify nature. You've had such beautiful and organic imagery all throughout your poetry this month, and once again it shines ...

Stella, I can't believe I haven't left a comment on your thread yet I adore your storytelling. I love how you always use your NaPo as a chain of poems ...

So honestly, not sure what's going on with this poem. Not sure about the line breaks or if it really has ended. If anyone has ideas or suggestions on where ...

@LZPianoGirl Thank you so much for your kind words Lucy! It means a lot to have you read and comment on my poetry. I'm glad you're liking it so far! ...

They tried to make her afraid They tried to make her afraid of looming trees and shadow-soaked woods with tangled bushes of rose thorns sharp enough to draw blood, but ...

she splinters like ice her heart burns in her chest like a coal in her chest,  even after all these years for her Prince  he is far from perfect, she ...

@StellaThomas Thanks so much for saying that and that means a lot coming from anyone, but especially a writer of your caliber! I'm glad to hear that my poems have ...

This is lovely, Lavvie. I love the title. I love the title. It makes me think of that quote by Beauvoir, "One is not born, but rather becomes, a woman." ...

Arcticus, your imagery is always so beautiful, fresh, and original. You also have such clean formatting of your poetry. Your lines always flow and you're so descriptive but it's never ...

Wendy Darling Knows Things Now Wendy Darling knows she is not a child She suspects this when her feet kiss ground and she is grateful for something stable and solid ...

she carries the future Prince Charming has never been more happy, and Cinderella has never been more miserable. She carries the future within her, her ladies in waiting tell her ...

I love the form of your poems, Sheyren. They look visually appealing and help the lines of your poetry flow effortlessly and naturally. Great job!

The Taming of Dorothy Gale's Heart Dorothy Gale was born on the night a tornado ripped through her hometown in Kansas. She howled louder than the tornado, Aunt Em always ...