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bluewaterlily

Fly with wings of steel.

  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: all the beginnings and endings

    The clock doesn’t strike midnight  When she arrives amongst the stillness Of the stars and the snow . When she knocks on the door, Her stepmother stands, stoically unsurprised Cinderella is ...

    Apr 4, 2021
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: a journal of deep breaths

    I love your beautiful and vivid yet concise imagery. Adore these lines "a soft flickering light,/sheltered by my fingers."

    Apr 4, 2021
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: all the beginnings and endings

    she'd swore she'd never go back and yet the carriage rattles carries her to the place she reluctantly called home but homesickness chokes her like ribbons of smoke twined around ...

    Apr 2, 2021
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: all the beginnings and endings

    She carries the future, her ladies-in-waiting tell her as they watch in awe each morning as her belly swells and ripens like a melon in the summer. She finds it ...

    Apr 1, 2021
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: all the beginnings and endings

    Table of Contents 1 she finds it strange 2 before the wolves come 3 grown 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 ...

    Apr 1, 2021
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: all the beginnings and endings

    napo2021.jpeg Yep, we're back to fairy tales this year. I feel like I need to add some context to this project. It is a continuation of my NaPo last year, ...

    Apr 1, 2021
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: 2021 NaPo Buddies

    I'd love to have a buddy!

    Apr 1, 2021
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: we'll see how this goes

    Erila, your poems are phenomenal. The imagery and the themes are so universal but you breathe life into every topic or issue that you tackle. And I am stunned by ...

    Apr 17, 2020
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: Rumpelstiltskin and other hungry men

    Carving Up the Darkness Alice is sure that she will paint the town with her tears. She knows the whispers that ghost her, rumors of her alleged madness, but she ...

    Apr 17, 2020
  • Lounge, The Re: What are you listening to at the moment?

    Halsey's latest album, Manic, especially "929" and "Ashley" Ariana Grande (just listened to her live concert album, "k bye for now" and it was divine) Lana Del Rey's latest albumn ...

    Apr 17, 2020
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: a few scattered sticky notes

    Mea, I am so happy to see a poem inspired by The Good Place. I also love how your poem has inside references to the show like the "everyone carries ...

    Apr 16, 2020
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: Rumpelstiltskin and other hungry men

    Being Human To the little mermaid the hardest thing about being human is getting used to breathing. She feels her flimsy lungs recoil and collapse with every tedious breath. The ...

    Apr 16, 2020
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: this tender self

    Another stunning poem! And congrats on making it almost halfway through NaPo. I love the structure of your poem, especially how you use fragments in the middle stanza and use ...

    Apr 16, 2020
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: Rumpelstiltskin and other hungry men

    Rumplestiltskin and other hungry men CW for incest and child abuse He unspools her hair from its bun, and it makes her think of Rumpelstiltskin about to turn straw into ...

    Apr 15, 2020
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: weathered, yes, but still standing

    niteowl, I absolutely adore your tenth poem "ghosts." The whole poem is beautiful and evocative. I think my favorite stanza was the second to last one about phantoms. That really ...

    Apr 14, 2020


You have to be a bit of a liar to tell a story the right way.
— Patrick Rothfuss, The Name of the Wind