bluepen19

I really loved this poem. I think you perfectly explained each and every one of us here. It's great how you in the beginning it started out as critical as ...

The fish... That fish is amazing.

Haha. I loved this poem. Nitrogen killed me. :) Like the reviewers above me said, I think you got Hydrogen and Helium mixed up. When I saw the symbols I ...

I liked this, but like a few reviewers above me stated, it did seem rushed through. There were many spelling/grammar mistakes that were already pointed out, so I won't say ...

This was great. It was beautifully written an real. Any teenage girl could easily relate to this, cause I sure did. Keep writing! (:

Haha! I love this so much. It was simple yet hilarious. My favorites weres lines six through two. Four and two were probably the ones I liked the most. (:

I really liked this story, and I could relate to it in many ways. "Once upon a time, you made me laugh. But you don't anymore. So I'm sorry, but ...

This story was somewhat interesting, and it may have some potential if written right. The first paragraph should have been broken up into several. If you read a book with ...

I just loved this story. It was well-written, and the fact that it came from another point of view made it even better. There was one thing I have to ...

I really liked this poem. It was simple and nice. Although this is a pretty common theme. It would have been more personal if you added a few descriptions.