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Re: My First Poem
yep, knowing i'm a parisite gives me a warm fuzzy feeling inside *she is presantly carted off to the funny farm* have a lovely day ~blue~ :D
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Re: first person
wow, your work makes my stuff look normal (though i'm not sure whether thats good or bad) maybe you sould write somthing shorter, that makes it easier to read. well, ...
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Re: Machines
okay, that was kinda wierd, but i think i like it. i wonder if that's how repressed psychs really think? I wonder if i know any people like that *looks ...
Mar 11, 2005 -
Re: My First Poem
I haven't read/ written an acrostic poem since primary school, but i liked this one. especialy the bit about the earth being a pendulem (is that how you spell it?) ...
Mar 11, 2005 -
Re: This is her life story
*blushes* Thanks ~blue~ :D P.S. you should join the weirdly coloured animal club in the randomness section
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Re: hurt
there were actually three people. one jumped off a building, one slit her wrists, the other practiced self harm. P.S. who's Mr. Reznor? have a nice day ~blue~ :D
Mar 11, 2005 -
Re: Hourglass (pretty short)
I like it, but i wanna know more about luke (is that his name?) and Liberty you said it was an ad on to an other story, can i see ...
Mar 10, 2005 -
Re: This is her life story
I actually don't like this poem, but you never know, someone else might. Once again, even if it's just to say it's crap, write a comment please Thanks ~blue~ :D ...
Mar 10, 2005 -
Re: Look at the Harlots! /P
ohhhhhkayyyyy... that was kinda wierd, I'm glad I'm not called vera or I would be REALLY freaked. *looks over her sholder just in case* okay, no ones there, but I'm ...
Mar 10, 2005 -
Re: What do you think of the Dynamic Avatars?
I don't think mine is worknig but apart fom that... I agree with the afro idea though. Urm, ho do you get a normal picture as oppossed to a dynamic ...
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Re: She still waits
hmmmmm... Thanks, I'll see what I can do...
Mar 10, 2005 -
Re: A few words about myself, hmmm... well, I'll give it a shot!
er... I like to write stuff ( apart from autobiograpy's, but you could probably tell if you've read my one!) but most of my poems are either wierd or depressing, ...
Mar 10, 2005 -
Re: Cold
Wow, i like this. But where is the light, and where is the dark? Apart from that it's really, really good.
Mar 10, 2005 -
Re: She still waits
I pass her on the way to school, every single day. Every morning I see her there, whether I'm early or I'm late. Her hairstyle never changes, or the expression ...
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Re: the mental patient
Thanks, I'll try to be more random next time. Or just write about someting different.
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