bluecows

Thank you :] I was unaware that you HAD to use punctuation in poetry, I always thought it was a matter of choice (my bad). I'll correct that now!

I don't know, I thought the last line sounded fine how it was... but other than that I agree with the person above, I also think it's an awesome poem ...

My love will last forever, our laugh will never fade, our hearts will stay together, until the end of days. Your kiss will ever linger, the words you used to ...

Thanks so much, I'm glad you liked you it, this poem means alot to me xoxo

Anorexia is commanly called Ana among anorexics, just as there is death and the person Death if you see what I mean, sorry for any confustion. And I missed out ...

Mirror Mirror on the wall, who’s the fairest of them all? Who’s that fat girl that I see always staring back at me? Mirror Mirror, why so cruel? Why my ...

Unfortunatly, not everyone could fit in the car (and the seats were very uncomfortable).

Unfortunately, they ate all the vegetation we needed to survive

Granted, but now your feet are out of preportion and if you wear a heavy rucksack you fall over :D I wish I was a genius

What was it about then?

Yeah, apart from a few grammar and spelling mistakes I think it was very good. I also like the idea of the big corporations slogging it out, though I always ...

It was 3:23 A.M., and my brother was as sweaty as a fat country sheriff. The wrangling went bad that night, and I dealt with the brunt of it. My ...

aww thanks :D anorexia actually but theres still a lot of similarities in their attitudes towards food

I like the bit 'They say I have my mothers skin; I can't see how they tell. It looks the same as everyone else's.' That made me smile Errm... apart ...

Yeah it was, this poem didn't feel or look right with lots of punctuation in it so I only put those two bits in :D