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i had to read it through a few ties because i'm really tired but that is such an amazing poem really beautiful. the language is just stunning. i love it.

very interesting the idea really grabs the mind if you iron out a few creases in tense and o forth it could amazing. hope to see the rest of it ...

i wrote this from the point of view of a house for an English test but i really would like to expand on it maybe use it as an introduction ...