bloodredsnows

Nice work... I personlly feel as though more description would have worked here to add the the level of compassion you feel for Rebecce. Themore of the situation and feelings ...

I like the description, however, the flow isn't what it could be. The darkness of it is wonderful, and you can feel the disgust that runs off of the city... ...

I attended my funeral that year, the summer sweeping across the open space where they laid my body and I watched. I remember being barefoot, watching from a distance, blinking ...