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Re: The F.U.N. Song.
LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! haha it was adorale! but, a it overused, don't you think??? oh well! you made it your own, and even added some dialoge!!!! that's pretty awesome! nice job!!!! ...
Jun 2, 2011 -
Re: Drained chapt. 5
ummmm just stating, you said "The sun didn’t shone through the clouds which was strange, it wasn’t night. I ignored it though." would it not be 'shine' insted of 'shone'?
May 21, 2011 -
Re: Burning chatper 2
well, the'll get longer duing the book, trust me! :D
May 18, 2011 -
Re: Bullets of Peace
i adored it, the history was accurate, and the charters were well thought out. but, what did they do to be killed and/or arrested???? it's nagging at me XD
May 18, 2011 -
Re: My First True Love
YOUR MOM IS SOOOOOOO LUCKY!!!!!!!! :D *sniff* that was beautiful, but i kind of guessed it, did you mean it to be that easy?
May 17, 2011 -
Re: First kiss
This was wonderful, i almost cried, almost, but, i think the ending was very amazing, i bet NO ONE saw that comming XD
May 16, 2011 -
Re: Burning
CRAP!!!! where it say's mother, it means father....sorry XD
May 14, 2011 -
Re: Burning
thanks! i'll remeber that :3
May 14, 2011